Hey BlackRaven66!
I love Teen Titns as well. Just saying the story is very good but you should work on the commas and speech lines. They shouls be like this:
"Hey Bob," said Joe, "Do you wanna go to the bar?"
Not like: "Come on, lets go."said Beast Boy.
You get it? Maybe look at websites or books.
Bai. Remember to check out my stories when i post some.