Review for i wanna scream i love you [peterick]

i wanna scream i love you [peterick]

(#) The-Nerd-Extremist 2016-04-27

Maybe you could possibly improve on the structuring of the paragraphs and the grammar in this story ... But I like the plot and the story line was great and I love peterick so you have me hooked there ...

Much Love ~ Kat