Review for Harry Potter and the New Powers

Harry Potter and the New Powers

(#) rlDawson 2017-03-22

I'm enjoying the story and I realize this published quite a while ago, but come on man. Did you do any math for your time dial action at all? Or try to think it through? You got it backwards and the numbers are all wrong.

Overall I like where the story is going though the chapters are way too short.

-Richard