I am amazing and I know it. ;) Just kidding. I don´t really know it. ;)
So... Did I tell you that I really love it that there´s no overt sexual/ romantic tension between Pete and Kales? I suspect that there will be one later but, of course, I could be wrong. But I think it´s really neat that you´re not romanticizing the thing. Pete´s got other problems to deal with right now. And so does Kales, I guess.
Keep it up!
Author's response
I was planning on writing any romance in this one at all. Both characters have some serious issues to resolve before they could even dream about love. Well, more than friendly love let's say. Because we all know Kales and Pete are pretty tight.