Review for The Anti-Eel Defense Squadron

The Anti-Eel Defense Squadron

(#) TheAmazingDelia 2018-01-13

henlo u gay

anyway, what i really like about your writing is how well it's written, even your shitposts. The amount of detail you put into it and the creativity is something i could never replicate and i really enjoy it.

Anyway, I feel like the dialogue is a bit choppy at times. You could make it flow a little bit better and that would improve it quote a lot.

Anyway, i really need a omega ultra advanced mega delta ultra walkie talkie