Oh...my...gosh!!!
Wow, I really severely enjoyed your story. Lol. It was really good. Well written and enjoyable. I feel bad for poor Ryan, he was just played by Pete and his man slut-ness. What a jerk! I meen I like Pete Wentz, but I like Ryan more so Ima take his side lol. Poor Ryan was competly used. Anyways im done rambling. Your story was exellent! Well writen with a good story line and everything, usually you dont see Ryan and Pete, its usually Ryan and Brendon so it was refreshing. Thanks for breaking up the magnotony (if I spelled that right) I hope you make a sequal that would just be wicked amazing! I'd sooo read it!
Well, keep writing. Ps, I kinda wished Jon would have punched Pete.
Lol.
-Kim
Author's response
lol. I personally was the one writing Ryan's side of things so I have to say yea I prefer him over Pete myself. I thought about having Jon smack him around a bit but at the same time that seemed a little out of Jon's very easy going character. I could see him as being "protective" but not violent.
There isn't going to be a sequel but I do have a couple of half finished stories sitting around that I'm trying to work up the motivation to finish that I may post soon.