Wow, your story is really good so far. I like the idea of it. The plot seems interesting enough for me to want to read on i enjoyed it. I just have one question, so you in real life, dislike panic and think there assholes? Or are you just using that for the sake of the story...and is Ryan really that huge of an asshole? Every interview I've ever seen they seem like fun, nice, guys. Not to mention Ryan seems shy, and nice and I dunno to himself. Just wondering...Panic is like my fav band lol. Keep writing I look forward to new chapters.
Ps...I like Fall Out Boy to...Pete
Author's response
i think Panic! have the total potential to be complete assholes and of all the horror stories i've heard, they out weigh the nice ones.
and I'm almost positive Ryan is a total dickhead.