Review for Mother and Daughter

Mother and Daughter

(#) limmy147 2006-12-08

Your story was very good and creative. The only part that bothered me was the
"I am my Father's daughter.He is his Mother's son." That got really annoying, but i can see that you put it there the most to emphasis it. Very good and very realalistic to the real show.

Author's response

Thank you very much! I suppose my use of repetition could get annoying, but I'm glad you enjoyed it all the same. :)