Cute story....but all this
"n"/Ryan said/n"
slashy N stuff was really confusing. It made it hard to read. I enjoyed your story though. Cute. Just try making it easier to read next time maybe?
Author's response
Whoa! I didn't do that!!! I'm terribly sorry, I don't know how that happened! But thanks! I'll fix it A.S.A.P.
Elena