It's all coming together. There's a whole bunch of Track Back-ers and they're paired up from...birth, I guess. And they are destined to be together to make Track Back babies, yes? So "they" are going to make Olivia fall in love with Pete. That's why she's envisioning Pete when she's with Patrick, because "they" are making her have feelings. I think I get it. Please tell me I'm on the right track, so I don't go insane. I'm slightly disappointed because I really wanted her to stay with Patty-Cakes, but it doesn't look good. Oh well. It's still an amazing story and you're still an amazing writer. I think this calls for a rating point.
Author's response
Hey Kyle ( I'm just gonna go ahead and hug you very very tight and give you one of my super duper kisses) I'm glad you understand and may I add, you understood everything just as I wanted you to. Thank you for back-reviewing. You rock sweets.
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