she watched the tree's whip by, matchsticks -> I really liked the comparison. :)
/"What are you going to change?" She asked.
"How I feel about you." He replied without a second thought./ -> Imagine we could do that in real life. As I know the human race, it would definitely do more harm than good… but I know a couple of people who could really use such superpowers.
"I could never love someone like you Peter, I'll always need someone who can love me more than themselves." She replied. -> Ouch. I bet that hit home. You rule, O. ;)
I wish Peter would just let go of her… :(
If there's one thing that will keep you awake at night, it's a guilty conscience. -> Tru dat. Period. Every single night.
Well, we all know what means: R.P.