Review for Children of the Future

Children of the Future

(#) Rangerscout 2006-12-15

The gift of fire was given from Prometheous (no I don't know how to spell that) to mankind. Course, he got in trouble for it and got chained to a rock where a eagle came and ate his liver everyday (it grew back, obviously). I think thats the story you wanted. I liked this one, it was an interesting idea. More detail would have been nice though.

Author's response

Thank you for telling the story. I will be adding the sequel now. You have spared many people the wait of the sequel=D Be proud!