First off all, that chapter has one of the coolest titles ever! :)
Things I dug the most:
- Trick saying that he learned faking happiness from the best, a.k.a. Pete. Seems pretty authentic to me.
- The whole chapter is convincing and honest. Despite the danger of just following a typical cliché (young men fear becoming dads because they think it will ruin their lives), you perfectly managed just to avoid that. It was new and refreshing. :)
If I wasn't fully convinced that our babies will have my fucked-up DNA in regards to hair, I'd offer producing some with you...