"Gosh." Matthew muttered. He never actually said the Lord's name in vein. He was a good, strong Christian boy raised in the South. -> I know you won’t mind me finding this amusing because you know I’m a dork at heart. ;)
Nice characterization of Matthew. Not too much but still portraying him neatly.
Wait a minute, mister. (Where did that mister come from?) Should I be suspicious of that Matthew dude… I think so… hm…
HA HA! Patrick “from the band”. I love ya. ;)
Patrick is so cute and tasty. I love ya more now.
Yup. This defnitely needs an “exciting” arpee (rating point). SO on the edge of mah seat rait nah.
I’m glad you’re having so much fun writing this because I’m having so much fun reading this. Now take your fun and produce another chapter. Pronto. Please?
Author's response
Hmm, definately not a mister. I'm glad you find my story so amusing... and Patrick IS cute and tasty... anyway, I'm sitting at my home now (as opposed to my apartment at school) and I'm wondering how I'm going to get my story from my laptop to our main computer... hmm. Shall be a challenge, or maybe I should invest in a flashdrive. We shall see.;)