Squee!
Hope you don't mind the fact that I am now glued on reviewing almost every story of yours. I feel somewhat annoyed that I don't know what 'Gatchaman' is, because I can only assume that your writing there is as good as this.
Very good. You make me love Remus for his lovely mind.
Author's response
I don't mind at all! I'm just glad you're enjoying what I've written.
I love Remus. I love that he's so different inside from what he presents to the world (afer all, he WAS a Marauder!!!)
As for Gatchaman - it's early 70's anime, and was probably the prototype for "team" anime that came after. You may know it as "Battle of the Planets" (which is what I mostly write), "G-Force" or "Eagle Riders"