I rated this exciting because that's how it made me feel to read it, the phone call, the little twist at the end.
I'm usually a sucker for extended reviews but I just can't quite contain myself.
I adore Patrick's insecurities and I loved the fact he was insistant she be there. He's awesome. :)
Write more - and stop stealing my rating points man....
Author's response
hmm... but I love rating points!