Review for Not Looking

Not Looking

(#) MMMramen 2006-12-18

I may not be the first to review, but I was the first to drop a rating point. Boo and yah! Anyway, let me just start off by saying I love your little references to the DoJ girls. I think one was Sarah, with the set of threes thing, and then I think you mentioned division of joy...it made me smile.

Secondly, wow. Just wow. When Pete and Olivia were going at it, my face= :O I had thought she gave in, since "they" were pretty much forcing it to happen. But that was her scam, right? To make "them" and Pete realize how wrong it was to hurt poor Patty-Cakes like that.

I'm a little torn about O being relieved of her gift. I mean, she's had it all her life. Now she won't be able to track back if something goes horribly wrong, which I know it will. But now she can be with Patrick and not have her thoughts tainted with Peter. But I have a feeling "they're" not quite done with her just yet. Excellent chapter, my dear.

Author's response

What a great review, have I told you how cute you are lately? xxx