Great story thus far. Very different from a lot of fan fics I've read in the past. I really like how you used real events that happened in their lives and like, more of a timeline with everything. It really is a great story. Keep it up :)
Author's response
Thanks so much for the review. I do enjoy putting real events into the story. Actually the next few chapers will have more of that. I sort of research things like the Tick Tock Diner (where they used to hang) Belleville, Mikey and Alicia's cat...(which really does wear a sweater).I really respect MCR so I try to add these things without any negative aspects.