Oh you can just shush immediatley because this was a stunning chapter. I was so invovled, you chapter didn't want to make me flick my eyes down to see what happens, because the sense of rhtyhm and the pace of the chapter was just right.
Tha ambiance was good to, and all the mannerisms, the crying, the words, they were very very powerful.
You rock!
Be Rated!!
Author's response
Great review! Be thanked!