It was really good, but ot exactly "original" you see alot of series where people try and match other people together and stuff right? but if you keep working at it you can make it more unique.
Oh yeah and I'm just gonna be an ass for a second, when Havoc-san was taking Ed-kun to the washroom it sounded like he was trying to do the nasty with him because he implied that the bathroom was the only place no one would hear.((lol sorry bout that I'm childish at times :P))
Also one more thing you spelled fuery wrong :P