When I saw this story in all its updated glory, I think I squealed with glee...consequently scaring the dog.
Anyways, that was a heavy chapter. I'm exhausted. My heart broke for Olivia. And your portrayl of her behavior was perfect. Just perfect. I must say, as fabulous as this chapter--this story--has been, I'm quite disappointed that their relationship couldn't withstand such a tragedy. But hey, that's life. I know they'll make it work once Olivia gets her thoughts and feelings together. Lovely chapter, my dear. Rating point for you.