Interesting way to start a story, and with an OC at that. Well done, although I'm not sure Sirius would call Remus old boy. Just a thought.
Author's response
Thanks for the review.
I'm a 57 yr. old American female, so what do I know about how 18 yr. old English schoolboys tlak to each other. HA!HA!
At least I didn't have him say DUDE!
HE!HE!HE!
Enjoy the story! THERE"S LOTS MORE...PLUS A ONE SHOT AND A SEQUEL (IN PROGRESS)!