Well there you go again. This chapter was absolutely fabulous due to the fact that you made Olivia and Patrick soooo real.
By the way, Angry Patrick = Hello Nurse!
Ok, on to boosting your ego some more. This chapter was filled with so many emotions I don't think my mind could keep up, and being as ADHD as myself, my mind can usually keep up with multiple anythings.
I love this story. Make it go on forever? K, thanks!