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Someones a Fall Out Boy fan...(Do your part to save the scene and stop going to shows...)
ANYWAYS...okay so I just read your entire story so far and all I have to say is... WOW...like holy shit. I dunno even know what to say. Your story is wicked killer rad amazing good. I used all the words I could to describe how much I liked it. It was writen so well, and just keeps changing and wow. Your good at this.
So, Ryan is a douche in this story. Wich is sad cause Im a Ryan fan...but thats okay cause Im a Brendon fan to, and he is a sweetie. I hope she ends up with him cause Ryan is a fucking asshole. What the hell!? How can you rape a girl. I hope the Real Ryan isnt like that, cause I luff him lots. Lol. But still she should end up with Bren.
Max and Vicky were cool a miss them, but I bet its cool to be hanging with panic. They seem fun. I luff those boys. Panic is like my fav band.
Your chapters are really really good. Everyone. Your a very good writer. The story has an interesting plot that keeps twisting and changing, wich really makes me wanna read more. Very good.
PLEASE WRITE MORE...I LOVE YOU FOREVER.... or I'll just poke you with a stick if you dont. Its your decision lol.
Much love! Sorry my thing is so long, but I lumped all the chapters into one big review.
Update soon and keep writing!
-Kim (Im apparently pretty rad...)