Hey there!
Awsome chapter yet again! i was on teh edge of my seat reading this. Poor Theresa. Hmm, I wonder if her dad will come and help save her? Wow, their lives get much more difficult as it goes. That's interesting and really original how you made Theresa's father know Jay's mom, Odie's dad and Herry's mom. I wonder if that'll all play a part in your story? Well awsome job yet again. You rock! Keep it up! Happy Holidays!
~Tory