hey shakespeare_lozza.
What an imagination you have...
Lief being a bed-wetter, Barda still living with his 'mum', and losing the belt to Popeye...this is a really funny and witty story. It is very imaginative and humorous. Continue your 'Pandora's Vest', I wish to read the rest of the chapters in your story.
Best Luck for future writing,
fooddude_lista.
Author's response
Thanks Lista... This is my first attempt at a prose -parody- composition. I am usually more of a parody playwright. Don't get me wrong, I love Deltora Quest, it is a good memory from my childhood. Popeye was crazy. Just like how Barda is mad and senile before his time. I'm grateful for your response, keep checking out my new stuff!