hey well I just wanted to say I like your story becuase you go really deep in what characters feel, well what haylee feels, it is a very good and complete OC , the only thing I'll have to say is that not everyboy in the world has to hit on haylee and that not so many bad things happen to a person.. well but its a really good story PD: sorry if I spelled haylee wrong or any other speelling msitakes you mighht find.. well please update soon