Cute drabble--just a couple of nitpicks. First of all, in the first paragraph, I'm assuming that's Leon's POV, but you might want to make that a little clearer. Secondly, you might want to clean up all those weird little symbol thingies as it makes your fic a little hard to read (especially for someone like me with really poor eyesight ^_^ )
I really liked D's last line--funny, and very D-ish!
Author's response
Sometimes the symbols show up due to ficwad.com (and I'll edit them), other times it's the encoding which you can change by right clicking your screen and selecting a different encoding option.