Wow, I really like this. You're really setting up the depth of character. You say you like my first chapter? Well I like yours!! It's mutual. XDXD I love it so far and will definitely read the rest.
Author's response
O__O Huzzah! ^____^ Okay, I'm done with the smiley faces for now. Hehe. Thank you so much! I'm in the process of catching up with your fic as I type.