i honestly hate being the last to review. all of the things i wanted to compliment you on have already been covered by the other DoJ girls. damn them.
i love how patrick and ella met each other. that is serious passion right there. i should give you a "hot" point, but generally i save those for Alex's stories, and i'm pretty sure you'd appreciate a "moving" point more. i would let you decide, but you AREN'T ON AIM RIGHT NOW.
this turned from a review to a ranting, so i'm just gonna quit while i'm ahead. seriously.