Geez. The tension is just rising. You foreshadow evilly, mellon nin. (That means 'my friend' in Elfish. Please don't ask how I know that.) Anyway, great chapter, but I want some action! URGH!!! And Frankie is just adorable is this!!! ;p Please update NOW!!!!
Author's response
I know grins and I also knew the elvish...yeah i went LotR crazed a couple of years ago is ashamed You will have some action, promise but you'll have to wait until I have sucessfully build up the tension first grins evilly laughs I know but Frankie's adorable any how