I like Molly's boldness. Very cool.
Patrick's very... Oh, he's Patrick. You know I gotta love him. Totally digging how you introduced him: singing and shy.
Author's response
the secret to Molly's boldness is that she really isn't. She was just more afraid of being left to the "wolves" by herself in the cafeteria.
Patrick: I've been planning on writing this story for a long time and for some reason I always saw the way Molly would meet him would be something goofy like that.