No ffense, I didn't think that this was going to be a good story, but I see it's getting somewhere. Please don't shoot me I'm not usually the one to give critisism but... you're cool coz you use chillax! lmao I'm a freak so don't listen to anything I say! You are a great author ^_^
~ Kim
Author's response
dont worry ! i dont shoot ppl =P!!
and i accept eveyones opinion whether its good or bad! and thxxxx!!=D