omg! You're kidding! That was such a good chapter [short, but good]. Plz update soon, this is so flipping suspenseful! I can't take it! But the characters are really incharacter, I congratulate you on that. I suck at keeping them in character. I love how Neil said "Oh, yeah by putting big signs up for people to trip over, I call that very nice" That was funny lol. Keep up the good work, you're one of my fave authors.
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Sorry. I like to keep them short so i can put ALOT of suspense on you. Once when i was going to the airport to pick my mum up i tripped over that sign. HE IS NOW FAMOUS