He was leaning on his elbows, which rested on the counter and was looking up at me through his thick rimmed glasses. He was very genuine. -> The Patrickness of this sent me right into a coma. I’m gonna comment more once I woke up.
She was standing there wearing a t-shirt that said 'Fall Out Boy Is For Lovers' under her gray sweater jacket, cane and all. -> HA HA HA! This woke me up. ;)
Had to rate this chapter “funny”.
This story is golden. You’re a gifted writer. I’m enjoying myself with every chapter I read on here. :)
Author's response
Thank you oh so much.
I wrote a few stories on here that you reviewed, but that was under a different name
i had to change due to me forgetting my password and for some reason not being able to log in at al... so i just got a new name.
but i always love your reviews!!