Interesting story line and plot; however, your writing seems rushed and it's lacking detals for what’s happening, especially between chapters. It seems like Shawn (Harry) has gotten a lot of powers (ex. The 12 different ways to teleport), but you forgot to say how he got them other then he is a half-demon half-whitelighter. Other then that, good story. Good luck and have fun writing.
P.S. you probably won’t get as many reviews on ficwad as you may else where, but you will get more per reader then else where.