Review for Independence Day

Independence Day

(#) Alorkin 2007-01-05

Two more great chapters! The 'seduction' was well writ, says I! Hermione handeled her part with the careful planning and attention to detail she has always shown. Mr Granger is truly understanding...much like Kinsfire had him in 'Family Matters' Also, the quote from Heinlein was well received. The 'food that talks' from 'intervention' was also funny.
When Harry and Heremione visited Gringotts, they spoke to Remus, but where did Remus come from? (and please don't say: 'from Mr. and Mrs. Lupin'.)
Ch 8. Hermione haas accepteed th hous-lf bond well, ow hat th reasoon has been carfully explained. I used that same reason in a few of my own fics.
Sharing the food prepared for the elves has quite likely created a bond of fierce loyalty for Harry's house elves. I'd imagine that they see Harry and Hermione as people who view House elves as equals. Well done!
Th swim att St Kitts, was most intriguing. I've tried that in scuba gar, but I don't think it's quite the same.
Dumbles&co. ar in for a nasty surpris when the board meets. That should be a world of fun!
I eagerly await the next page of 'Indpendence Day'. Alorkin