i absolutly adore the story line. i do have to say tho, that's probably the only thing that draws me in. nothing more. your style or writing and deltail and deffinitly not the best. dont get me wrong tho, i still adore it. i jsut thought that maybe you'd want to get a review that you may actually find useful.
can't wait for an update
lauren
Author's response
Well I'm glad you like the story line and I'm srry if my writing style doesnt interest you!