Review for The Twelve Days Of Christmas

The Twelve Days Of Christmas

(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-07

Staring at your freshly painted nails and commenting them with “perfect” kind of makes me classify you as a possible “psycho”. Good job, Katy. ;)

" wonder why women won't move in with you??" He asked, raising his eyebrows. -> Cos he’s not Patrick?

“hugged the man way” -> Ha ha. Cute.

/"You've just gotta know what you want Pete." He said intelligently. Pete put his knife and fork down.
"Yeah....." He said thoughtfully./ -> I found this really comedic. Is that alright with you? ;)

Wonderful supsense-creating by inserting that flashback section. On the edge of my seat. And now, on the floor.

Patrick’s wedding vow is… perfect. :)

Ha, love to read how “This ain’t a scene” REALLY came about.

I’m rating this “moving”. For the whole story and for the final author’s note.

Mighty proud of ya, DoJ sister, wife and real friend. international huggage