Patrick telling Molly to grow up is slightly ironic.
I loved the creating of suspense that was brought about by not telling the reader right away what objects Molly took. Ok, maybe it was kinda obvious for a person with a brain. Anways, I felt the suspense. :)
yea. I was writing that and I said to myself "what would his reaction be? he's 16 and male. Ok he'd be not understanding and pissed off."
And yea, I tried to create suspense glad I managed it.