Hey there!
Awsome story so far! Definitely a favourite. :D Please update soon! I really want to know what happens next. Don't worry about cliffies. They're fun:P I can't wait to read how Theresa kicks butt. Just a few things though. there were a few spelling/grammer errors. But that's about it. Hope that doesn't ocme off as mean, not trying to be. Awome job! Keep it up. Love the story:D
~Tory
Author's response
Don't worry about offending me... ya didn't. And I edited it! Yeah me!!!!! Thanx for the hint..... Luv ya!!