Arg....hand cramp...i think my fingers have seized up in a mouse position. I've been reading this for a good couple hours now and seriously how could i have missed it! It's frigging ACE!
You're so good with dialogue(i'm insanely jealous btw), i can really imagine all of your characters talking to each other.
I love how your angst is realistic aswel. Usually stories start out good and then the angst makes it too deep and depressing. I'm not a huge fan of angst (Perhaps you can tell!?) at the best of times but you write so realistically that i couldnt stop reading.
This is most definately going in my faves and will be getting many more of my points in the future. I'm just sorry that i didnt find your fic sooner! XX
Author's response
thanks so much! I dunno how you missed it either i've been putting up like 2 chapters a day since the 28th. jk. :) Glad you're on board now. I try and keep things realistic, my biggest peeve in fanfic is how melodramatic and unrealistic things can get. You don't meet Pete and marry him 3 chapters later. shrug