Review for Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?

Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?

(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-11

Patrick is disturbingly short -> Ha ha. Sometimes I can’t believe how much a sole adverb can change the meaning. Or rather, add to the meaning.

If I had had a friend like Elyse maybe I would not think most girls suck today. Who knows?

Patrick is definitely the type to get pussy-whipped. nods Which is pretty much my type of guy.

Geeez, the only thing Beer is good for, is listening to it…

This chapter was very coolish! I especially liked how you described the bar thing because I am not familiar with line dancing at all and the athmosphere there. (First I wrote “hatmosphere”.)

Poor Molly-Mol.

Author's response

coming from a fellow short person I feel I can totally use words like disturbingly. I'm 5'1" he should be happy he's at least taller then I am..i think.
I think I want Elyse to be my bff too.
I have to admit I wrote him pussy whipped after the AP article when he was all "book all our anniversirys cause I dont wannna be alone" and I laughed. and then I felt like a terrible human being.
line dancing is SO fun. crowded bar, lotsa noise tons of people. its kind of like a punk show without the piercings.