you spelt torential wrong and you spelt Nemean ion wrong.
But So far so good. Question, Is Atlanta actually Atalanta in this story?
Author's response
Haha, thanks. I'll try to keep an eye on that next time- but I finished this at like midnight and was so tired, so I just updated it and went to sleep XDD
And about Atalanta/Atlanta... I don't think so, in this story at least.