Review for Conversation


(#) babaca 2007-01-17

Bittersweet, but yes, like the other reviewer, your spelling needs a bit of work. Gossip and not gossup. You may want to find a beta reader for you (or make sure you have a decent spell-check program. There are nice ideas in this but a bit of tightening up makes it easier for the reader to understand what's happening. But I did like it.