That was a shitty review. Shame on me. I like how he didn't have sex with her. He sensed she was nervous and I'm sure he's not exactly comfortable with the idea. I think they should date a little first. I don't want my Molly sleeping around with that Patrick kid. He should at least take her out to dinner first.
Author's response
yea. I didn't want Patrick to be a total tool. I've done too much of that to him in this story so far. They have one teeny speed bump coming up and then they'll figure things out. for a little while at least. bwhahahaha. ;)