“Gladice Mulberry“ -> You have the talent of conveying somebody’s unattractiveness in a name. I am very impressed. ;)
"Yup. And you look like my mother when you stand like that. Stop it. It's creepy." He said shoving a handful of popcorn into his mouth. -> The Trickster’s cute, no doubt about it. But his mother should think about dressing her age…
HA HA! Elyse is the greatest.
Why is that I’m still crazy about that Patrick jerk? (Because you’re such a wonderul writer, is the answer…)
Patrick’s thoughts on the stockings are so male, it’s like a documentary. (Porn?)
WHY IS HE SO CONFIDENT? Does he know he’s the bomb in bed?
Bridget, you are so awesome for not making this “perfect” or mushy. It’s so real, I LOVE it! :)
Author's response
lol. I love naming characters for that reason; Yea Patrick's Mommy really shouldn't be rocking those mini's; Elyse IS the greatest; Patrick and the stockings--I had to give the little boy a kink. this is me we're talking about; Patrick is so confidant because lets face it, for all that she was an uberslore (slut+whore) Allison was supposed to be HOT. That's gotta give a boy a big ego boost. He had to be doing something right; Until I actually have perfect sex I refuse to write it. lol.