I have a few things that I'd like to say. First off, I love your writing. You really can set the mood, especially with the scenery. The only problem I had, was, that it ended all too quick. After the fifth chapter, I was expecting so much more than just the ending. It just kind of left me hanging...and that made me sad. I wanted more! But, I will say, that it was well-written and it did keep me interested in it. Over all, I enjoyed it, but I wish that there would have been more.
Author's response
Thanks for your reviews! I think the real reason that I ended so quick was that I was ready to be done with the story. But I will take your comments in consideration. Maybe there will be a sixth chapter...