Sure I'm a little late in reviewing this but... I really liked it. I just got into the whole slash fiction thing and I gotta say yours was very intriguing. I loved the image of Ryan with one hand over his heart and the other over his mouth as he peered at Brendon from behind a tree. Too cute. Your story actually makes me want to write a m/m. (I've never written one before. LOL). Okay...this is getting kinda long, but yes, I do believe I would like a sequel to this. ;)
xo
Author's response
Thank you. You can write a good m/m I believe. You should try. I'll write a sequel to this... eventually.