(#) koppe 2007-01-24
Good story, though certainly original. Hope you'll update soon.
I do hope Harry and Luciana can make a go of their relationship, and look forward to Harry meeting her parents (as well as Harry's friends and "parents" meeting her). Maybe they'll end-up married and with kids.
I also hope Dumbledore and Fudge gets involved -- and perhaps that Harry visits Hogwarts... or perhaps starts working there as DADA-teacher as his cover is somewhat blown.
Finally, I'd love a prequel about Harry's short time at the Dursleys and at the orphenage, and then about his training. That would also be a great place to introduce the royals and explore the reaction of the Wizarding world to Harry's disapperance and assumed death.
Please update soon!